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Open Poetry #40

Hotline to NASA

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-04-13 06:43 PM

“Hello, Astronomer,

Sky lost a celestial object
Which shines at the midnight
Nothing since is quite perfect
Without its radiant red light
And it is the only gleam of beam
For people who lost their dream. “

Nonsense.

The moon is there
Glaring its fine flair
And graceful as usual,
In her cheerful single stare.
With my dear Hubble
The image is much clearer.

“sir,
It is not the gaudy rock
Changing face around clock
It is the Mars, sir,
The one always enchants my heart”

Come to our observatory, lady
I show you the clearest picture
With the most advanced telescope
To see the finest structure.

“Sir,no measure is as sensitive as my feelings.”

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-04-13 06:48 PM

I particularly LOVE the last line!:

“Sir, no measure is as sensitive as my
feelings.”

Applause!

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

2 posted 2007-04-13 07:17 PM

seeing is believing or just to see in such belief

a poet who cares

Andrew Sewell
Junior Member

since 2007-04-16

Posts 24
County Durham, England

3 posted 2007-04-16 04:51 PM

I really enjoyed the read, a very charming poem.

Andrew

ScottHughes
New Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 3

4 posted 2007-04-16 05:10 PM

Thanks for posting that! We all want to travel the stars.

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-04-23 07:38 PM

Enjoyed...James

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