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gmcooper
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since 2007-05-30
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0 posted 2007-06-03 05:42 PM


The journey begins when you turn and face the wind
when you go home and the door is locked.
And you're okay with it. And you just smile.
It is a lovely journey all the way around.

[This message has been edited by gmcooper (06-05-2007 10:35 AM).]

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2007-06-03 06:17 PM


The inner eyes always see clearly.
What a delightful talent you have.
Already a fan!  Write on.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-06-04 02:15 AM


I agree. A very beautiful poem.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-06-04 04:25 AM


Like this...James
gmcooper
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4 posted 2007-06-04 07:12 AM


I'm glad you enjoyed taking this journey along with me!

Thank you .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2007-06-04 06:16 PM


splinters and gypsy gravel....
gourmet sauce added
for scent

enjoyed it gm

gmcooper
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since 2007-05-30
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6 posted 2007-06-04 07:37 PM


Dark, yes, wonderful. Thank you!
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
7 posted 2007-06-04 11:07 PM



yes indeed gm
a wonderful trip
I enjoyed it so much

barefoot...

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