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Open Poetry #40

Journey

gmcooper
Junior Member

since 2007-05-30

Posts 47

0 posted 2007-06-03 05:42 PM

The journey begins when you turn and face the wind
when you go home and the door is locked.
And you're okay with it. And you just smile.
It is a lovely journey all the way around.

[This message has been edited by gmcooper (06-05-2007 10:35 AM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2007-06-03 06:17 PM

The inner eyes always see clearly.
What a delightful talent you have.
Already a fan! Write on.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-04 02:15 AM

I agree. A very beautiful poem.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-06-04 04:25 AM

Like this...James

gmcooper
Junior Member

since 2007-05-30

Posts 47

4 posted 2007-06-04 07:12 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed taking this journey along with me!

Thank you .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2007-06-04 06:16 PM

splinters and gypsy gravel....
gourmet sauce added
for scent

enjoyed it gm

gmcooper
Junior Member

since 2007-05-30

Posts 47

6 posted 2007-06-04 07:37 PM

Dark, yes, wonderful. Thank you!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-06-04 11:07 PM

yes indeed gm
a wonderful trip
I enjoyed it so much

barefoot...

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