Open Poetry #40 |
I'll Wait For You |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
I'll Wait For You Upon the path to Heaven’s gate Patiently she stands in wait She always will be there to greet Her loved one when his life’s complete In brightest day or fading sun She’ll be there when his journey’s done To welcome him and be his guide And once again be by his side So long ago she had to leave Her sweetheart all alone to grieve Now sorrow fills her aching heart For the one with whom she had to part She waits each day as years roll by And hurts each time she sees him cry Memories have dulled the pain But in his heart she will remain She longs to hug and hold him tight To let him know that she’s alright She knows he misses her so much And longs to feel her gentle touch If she could have one final word To let him know, and rest assured She’d say “Until your time is through” “With light in hand I’ll wait for you” |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
what a beautiful poem in the morning to bright my day! enjoyed very much and the picture too. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I know this is meant to be a reassuring poem, but for some reason it made me tear up and sniffle. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
The images in this are forlorn although I'm sure you didn't mean them to be. However they are also strong powerful images of love...haunting images one (not me) might say. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful and poignant. I love these connections that know no boundaries. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I find it a comforting thought that our loved ones who have passed are watching over us and that we will be reunited when our time does eventually come. A soul-touching piece of poetic penning. Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is an absolutely beautiful poem, which touches my heart. |
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