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Spring on the river.....
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Spring on the river..... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 Spring on the river... the island nest of young swans floating in flowers. The first sign of spring~ robin eyes her new red blouse in this rain puddle. Spring on the river the tips of water grasses dripping with diamonds. Spring whispers secret rain to the listening trees till they shout loud green. . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
How LOVELY sweet lady. Hugs. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
spring-as if the world were newly made for the very first time well captured arthur xx you still have not told me where that hankichef went? |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Spring whispers secret rain to the listening trees till they shout loud green. Nice personification and imagery, Nancy. Gives an energetic springy feelin'. Thanks for sharing. MoonShadow . |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enchantresss, your words ring so true. Two days of heavy rain has done wonders to bring out the green; White Iris; Blue Pumbago; Tall Aloe; Mexican Petunia and others. Yes Spring is on the way. martyjo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Nancy, this is so PERFECT in its poetical beauty and in the visions it evokes. I will keep it, because every single word is a jewel. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am still waiting for Spring to touch us~~ so I will live yours for now.   M |
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Waterfall27 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 98Ontario , Canada |
LOVELY  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedLady~ Absolutely and totally LOVELY~ Such beautiful Haiku serenity here~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Enchantress, This poem works very well, and I enjoyed reading it. Bobby |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"the tips of water grasses dripping with diamonds." which I'll call my lover to get them to make a pair of earings. if it is dripping wine that brewed over the winter, I may just get drunk. love this sooooo much!!! thank you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, dang... IWIHWT....with emphasis.... how lovely! How much it is YOU. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is fantastic, Nancy. But then, you always do well no matter what you write. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I really needed to wake up to this exquisite bracelet of natural gems, this morning. (Experiencing the first bite of the approaching South African winter, although our winters, particularly in Durban, are infinitely milder than many parts of the USA.) I am going to keep this and read it many times. Thank you so much for letting me know about it. I will re-imbibe it many times during my busy (and stressful) day today. Hugs Owl |
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outlawthunder Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 67 |
a cycle of life eternal the power of simplicity and love an image -- no a reality of purity of spirit and birth new season new members of Mother Nature's love of life at her best... thank you for such a beautiful poem the power of your words reach way beyond the pages OUTLAWTHUNDER |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker spring is one of my favourite times of the year. And you've captured it beautiful with your pictures and words. Very well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Enchantress: I needed something lovely for my eyes to touch, and I knew if I came to this page I'd find your thoughts here. I especially love: Spring whispers secret rain to the listening trees till they shout loud green. Thank you. K |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Your comments are so much appreciated! |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
i like hte last stanza, makes me think of the river round where i live, so peaceful |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The picture you paint is pure spring...I love the vision and feel of this delightful poem....*Big Hugs* |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Loved this Nancy - Paul |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Extremely pleasant 'write'! [great choice of photo-image as well] Applause!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Nancy "robin eyes her new red blouse" how fanciful and gorgeous is that? |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How beautiful this is, sweet lady!! Your picture and words fit so perfectly!! Huggies, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my goodness....thank you all again so much! For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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