Open Poetry #40 |
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Eternal Flames and Endless Spring! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Eternal Flames and Endless Spring I walk.... beyond the slant-light afternoon, as evening falls in stagnant pools of twilight discontent, along love-echo shores of life’s regrets and shadow-thoughts, dark-dancing in a sea-world spinning, past half-forgotten dreams of broken hearts too long denied...or lost to rain and tears! I seek.... only wings to fly, if just once more toward the eager radiance of creativity and hope, the ‘eternal flames’ of endless Spring in a very ‘different’ world! [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (04-11-2007 06:53 PM).] |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
'Eternal Flames and Endless Spring' the title has told all. in any world we do not want to get hurt. the hurt! enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet, A whisper on the wind of chaos and well done. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Excellent poetry! We can make THIS world a paradise, if we learn to love each other. But meanwhile I spread my wings and fly to that other "very different" world where everything's all right and where love reigns supreme. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Robert Jordan Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392Philadelphia Pa USA |
Secondhanddreampoet, This is a well laid out poem of every human’s dream--never-ending spring. It's a shame the universe wasn't set up that way. I like your handle. Bobby |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"along love-echo shores of life’s regrets and shadow-thoughts, dark-dancing in a sea-world spinning, past half-forgotten dreams of broken hearts too long denied...or lost to rain and tears!" I LOVED this part....excellent!! a keeper for me ![]() |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You weave a magic with your pen that lifts the thoughts to places where dreams are woven...Wonderful visions that are filled with desire and hope...Where hope is all things are possible...*Big Hugs* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Bruce. Another ![]() May you fly high ~ and happily! ~ in the eternal flames of an endless spring! ![]() Your poem touches a strident chord. Play on, my friend. ![]() Linda |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Images harvested while fresh and clear. Beautifully done, Bruce! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
A poem even more beautiful than the dream inside it. - Owl |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ You are sipping ink from a beautiful muse~ BEAUTIFUL IS THIS~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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