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The Day The Moon Cried
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The Day The Moon Cried |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Rain poured down, cold winds blew, tears are falling. The sun melted, no warmth shines, just darkness. This is why, the moon did cry, death of the one, The true sun, that shined love, glorious beams, That warmed the soul, filled her sky, with wonderful things. Day and night, two opposites loving, each, one-of-a-kind.  Created for the other, belonging together, Two unique forces, The sun and the moon, centers of the universe, until that aweful day, That a dead star fell, from the outer limits, Killing the sun. The moon is sad, she glows knowing, she is the only light, Glowing from the love, that the sun burned forever, into the lantern of her heart.   J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (04-11-2007 11:42 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sweetie this is so beautiful "Glowing from the love, that the sun burned forever, into the lantern of her heart." Just lovely! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Than you so much Gentle spirit! Hugs to You! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ARH~ Tenderly touching is this penning~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Stunning pictures and this: "Glowing from the love, that the sun burned forever, into the lantern of her heart." Lovely! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I can but second "Honeybunch's" comment... particularly pursuant to that marvelous image: "Glowing from the love, that the sun burned forever, into the lantern of her heart." wonderful line!! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful and touching.Oh.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful heart visions! Love, Margherita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Beautiful pictures, especially the last one. Your poem complements them nicely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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