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...I trust you...
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...I trust you... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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. Sharing our bodies is one kind of close... Sharing our secret thoughts is another. Taking the risk of stripping bare the ego... getting down to who we are and still feeling loved and still making love... is the best there is. Come close.... I trust you. . |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress A delight to read.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Smiling. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nance~ Soft, sultry, sexy and sooooo lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and grinning...... |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Take the risk.... come close...... I trust you. Lovely thoughts, Nancy... what dreams are made of. MoonShadow . |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
These words really got me thinking..I was moved by these words. I guess I really can't explain. I loved your thoughts and wish more people learned to trust. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
That is definitely taking a big risk. One, I don't know that I could do again. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Powerfully stunning...this poem hit hard in a good way...how true it is that one must really trust someone to lay bare all that we are and still love....BRAVO!!!...A masterpiece.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yet another beautiful write dear sister of mine.  Miss Ya & Hugs !! Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This speaks to essence of love Tinker. Insightful and sensual words!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
you've written so eloquently "Trust" |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Taking the risk of stripping bare the ego... getting down to who we are and still feeling loved Sigi Enchantress so softly beautiful!
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
The best gift of all--the gift of trust that people can give each other. Beautiful work, Nancy!  sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
loved this Nancy - Paul |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You said it, kid Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"the best there is" so true Nancy love it... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...for some it is hard to trust...I believe I am one of those...but I'm working on it...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 ~Thank you all so much for your kind responses~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Perfect, perfect, perfect!! And beautifully warm. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Taking the risk of stripping bare the ego... getting down to who we are and still feeling loved magnificant writing Lady Jane, very much enjoyed this |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy...such wisdom words are love like it should be. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh yes... wonderful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
very profound nancy arthur |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Once again I thank you all, you're so very kind~ |
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Waterfall27 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 98Ontario , Canada |
beautiful write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Still working on trust and believing... Making wonderful progress...James |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Could not have said it any better. You went straight to my heart with this one. Beautifully stated. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Nancy Lee... it is posts like this that make me truly realize how insignificant I am in the world of poetry..... You are truly one of the best here. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful poetry, Nancy! Yes, at the heart of love lies that thing called "trust". |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Once again I thank you all so very much!~ |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
you said it so beautifully, it is the best there is. Loved it. |
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