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Open Poetry #40

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-04-08 08:23 PM

Why not be a white cloud
Crafted into a soft cradle
To hold my soft, tender heart
That dreamed sweetly in your art?

Why not be a spring fountain
To form into a crystal star
That melted my joyful giggling
Into the cosmic light afar?

Why not be the morning fog
To drift into pair of wings
That lift me heavenly up,
Where I can happily sing?

Robert Jordan
Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

1 posted 2007-04-08 08:46 PM

Drauntz,

Why not indeed. This runs along very nicely. It's an enjoyable read.

Bobby

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2007-04-08 08:58 PM

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because the world
where you would think you are
isn’t the one we others know

.

John

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-04-08 10:02 PM

you are very right John. Thank you for your comment. indeed what a selfish, brainless cry! I know.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2007-04-08 11:28 PM

Why not take us on this magical flight where we can all meet in a world designed by you...I feel it would be magnificent...I love the vision and feel of this poem...*Big Hugs*

passing shadows
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