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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2007-01-07 01:25 AM

Marrow

my heart is yours
my breath is taken
with you in exhale
tenderly I am held
in ribs of whispers
center of bones
for you are ivory
love’s essences core

“all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2007-01-07 01:26 AM

very passionate and romantic, Helen.
I enjoyed reading.
Hugs,
Ethel

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-01-07 01:42 AM

oh Helen, how lovely!!!
Happy New Year my sweet poet friend
RDB

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-01-07 02:12 AM

how in love!

beautiful write!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2007-01-07 05:09 PM

Becoming one
is a beautiful intonation

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2007-01-07 05:17 PM

1slick_lady
Forgive my humor but this reminds me of a had boiled egg. Once you peel the shell and salt it, it tastes delicious.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2007-01-07 05:27 PM

Excellent Helen. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2007-01-07 06:02 PM

Beautiful!

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

8 posted 2007-01-07 08:23 PM

Such sweet words you write!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2007-01-07 09:37 PM

Great to read you again Helen.
This is full to the brim with such depth of feeling.
TD

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

10 posted 2007-01-07 09:40 PM

"center of bones"

yes Helen!
real love

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

11 posted 2007-01-07 09:50 PM

How romantic and metaphoric. Most enjoyable.

MoonShadow
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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2007-01-08 11:50 AM

You went to the core of it

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

13 posted 2007-01-13 09:24 AM

There are a certain few poets in PiP, whose words I miss when I go a'wandering from here, and the missing inevitably draws me back. You're one of them.

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