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...Melting... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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. I was perfectly suspended in winter's isolation ~ wrapped in my body's warmth, secure in my own keeping.. and you perfect in your condition both of us poised toward each other, frozen in our certainty and having known exactly what it was to be cold and separate and sure... we chose to melt. . |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A most enjoyable entre' into the realm of "40".....Thanx Nancy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this LOTS |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully expressed, dear Nancy! Love, Margherita  |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I am never ever displeased when I read your poetry. Such passion.. Donc la beaucoup de passion fait ce jeune prodige de coeur si je gaspille le temps avec les plus jeunes dames in a nutshell enchantress you have a lot of passion in your heart...nothing bad here..~Bill [This message has been edited by trutodaraiders (01-08-2007 05:56 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy...What a wonderful way you have described this....feeling...love...just beautiful!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Surely your words would melt ice on the coldest of days dear sister of mine. Lovely this and you. hugs, Chris |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now thats a way to warm up a forum...   |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Outstanding imagery! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
a nice strong write with a good ending arthur |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice Nancy! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Yep - you did it great here - but you always do - melting - just love those images - Paul |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Nancy a beautiful winter love perfect! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful, Nancy Lee. Makes Open #40 very pretty! Huggies, Ethel |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Positively passionate Tinker. Your words thaw hearts. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Nancy... simply wonderful!! RDB Happy New Year to you my sweet poet friend ! |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
I love the wintery feel to this. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Shared warmth is always the catalyst to stoke the furnace into a roaring, passionate flame. Would that more of us be so fortunately blessed, Milady. Well Written, Nancy. Moonshadow . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very nice Nancy....Lovely and warm! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Your replies are so much appreciated... they warm the heart and spirit on the coldest days~ In the midst of winter, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lovely Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I was perfectly suspended in winter's isolation ~ wrapped in my body's warmth, secure in my own keeping.. and you perfect in your condition both of us poised toward each other, frozen in our certainty and having known exactly what it was to be cold and separate and sure... we chose to melt. I'm smiling and at the same time, sighing...how utterly beautiful..enchanting...wonderful word use, very much enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nance~ You *smile* me ... I adore the softness of these thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
beautiful as always hugs Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
a triumph ! yes |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"we chose to melt"  Very nice!! JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO...What a wonderful way to come together...*sigh*...melting into one another...Perfect...**big hugs** |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and having known exactly what it was to be cold and separate and sure... we chose to melt. It is a choice, isn't it? *S* This isn't just romance... it's love... and it's beautiful! *S* |
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