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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Pacing Footsteps Pacing footsteps out my door I would they pace upon my floor Hours draining through times whole There’s little time for my goal What use the pace of timeless cast? To hang from ropes those out the past To stay the heart outside the floor To not come in and use my door The dark that seems to block its road Are phantoms of another mode? One more footstep on the path Will wet my mind a showers bath Echoes from the wings that fly Set the face upon the dye And colors of a field of hue Rain upon my mind in dew It’s waiting for a simple dare To wake me from a fruitless stare |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your mind in dew ... how beautifully expressed. Those footsteps seem friendly, as you wish them inside your door. May you never feel lonely, dear Seymour, nor "stare fruitlessly" ... you are love and your eyes speak of love. It's an intriguing piece. Hear the knock on your door, it's my thought of love for you. Hugs. Margherita  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The vision is beautiful with words that sing...there seems to be a touch of melancholy so I send you extra *Big Hugs* |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Hours draining through times whole There’s little time for my goal" but you are timeless Sir Sy and this poem is excellent and thought provoking |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita A very sweet reply, I thank you.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady You are a dear, thank you. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hours draining through times whole There’s little time for my goal Then you better darn well hurry up!  This was so beautifully done, and rhymed Sy. Here's something for you to do today during Passover. Passover Quiz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Thank you for the puzzle and happy Easter. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"One more footstep on the path Will wet my mind a showers bath" VS "colors of a field of hue Rain upon my mind in dew" Your mind will get washed in either way. I love those comparing. enjoyed very much as always. happy Easter, sir. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
So Sy, what simple dare would you like  and I hope you have had a Happy PassoverM |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Happy Easter and thank you for the read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Had a happy holiday thank you and thank you for the stop by. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy... I have missed your words! Exquisite as always! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do love this...the second verse especially glad I didn't miss this one like I've been missing so many lately |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! May your days be glorious rainbow days of misty-colored hues! "There’s little time for my goal" ~ I am now waving my magic wand. ~ Swish. Swish. May our dear sonneteering friend have all the time he wants or needs to meet his each and every goal! So mote it be!  Your poetry reaches out and touches people! ~ and the angels! lol You are loved and admired beyond all earthly measure and by so many! ~ And I be one! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB And I missed your words to. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, I miss you when you miss me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel To be loved by an Angel, what more could one ask? :squeeze; ;loveya: |
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