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How it is
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How it is |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I cant get past it, almost cant bear to look, though its in front of me and theres no-where else to turn. Cant divert my eyes, as the vision is already there, in every area of this room, as it closes me in and closes the space in my heart. Someones taking what once was mine, something so precious, its irreplaceable, The type of gift that only comes, once in a lifetime A true friendship that we once shared, Talking for hours, sharing everything, so close, sometimes I forgot where you began and where I ended. Now its all gone, someone else has your heart, shares your dreams, shares your future. I wont apologize, or make excuses. Wont play it down. This is how it is. I cant get past it. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Time seems to deaden the pain a little...My heart goes out to you...*Big Hugs* |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Dear friend, I know this ache. It will get better ... but it will take time. Lovely way to express it, though. ~Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
True friendships don't end. This poem is entirely sad. But I know what you mean and what you write of, (unfortunately) |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
yes, very sad. But cherish the good moment. beautiful poem as others. enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...I know we get caught up in our emotions, but in reality, one door closes and another opens...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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