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luvvbuzz
Junior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 24

0 posted 2007-04-07 11:42 AM

How many eggs did you get
I got three
School taught us about Jesus
But that doesn’t matter to me

All my friends care about
Is how many I got
Like that’s all there is to easter
Maybe they forgot

They asked were my eggs big
Was the chocolate iced
I think they forgot to ask me
Am I thankful to Jesus Christ?

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-04-07 12:09 PM

nice.
enjoyed

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2007-04-07 02:05 PM

This poem is simply beautiful...it is so sad that we forget what Easter is really all about....I too am thankful for the sacrifice Jesus made for all of us...*Big Hugs*

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2007-04-07 04:09 PM

True. And gently told.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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4 posted 2007-04-08 05:44 AM

enjoyed this

TerryW
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since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

5 posted 2007-04-08 09:49 AM

Very lovely write. Very reflective of today's feelings, too. Thanks for sharing!

~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2007-04-08 12:20 PM

Very insightful write, and yes there is sure more to today than chocolate on your fingers. Very well done.

Carpe' Diem

jody5
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since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

7 posted 2007-04-08 01:40 PM

Absolutely wonderful write! Standing ovation from me!

Hugs Kimberly

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2007-04-08 03:16 PM

Right to the point. Very well done!
Sadly true!
Love,
Margherita

luvvbuzz
Junior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 24

9 posted 2007-04-08 03:42 PM

thank you for all your comments, the poem is about a feeling im sure we have all experienced at some point, the commercialization of tradition lol

http://www.luvvbuzz.f2s.com/poets_moonlight/index.php

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

10 posted 2007-04-08 04:51 PM

Luvvbuzz,

This is a cute little number. However, please capitalize Easter, it's an important day to us Catholics and other Christians.

Bobby

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