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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-04-06 10:15 PM

            If only!

On this comet-bright night
while Aurora-rainbows dance
along the Milky Way...

If only....

I could sweep the moonbeams
from your radiant eyes...
so you might finally ‘see’ me!

If only....

I could pick the finest
    'word bouquet'
from the garden of
    poetic dreams...
so you might clearly ‘hear’ me!

If only....

I could touch your lovely heart
with my mind’s epiphany...
so you might truly ‘know’ me!.....

with emotions running free
and our spirits spinning
chords of passion-fire ecstasy
lighting love’s finest flame
'til soul-borders blend
in sweetest serendipity!

If only....

along the Milky Way...
while Aurora-rainbows dance
On this comet-bright night!

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (04-06-2007 11:13 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-04-06 10:19 PM

now this is a scene to behold!!

outstanding!

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-04-06 10:33 PM

beautiful and touching.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2007-04-06 10:34 PM

"igniting love’s finest flame
'til soul-borders blend
in sweetest serendipity!"

SO pretty! I like this very much

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

4 posted 2007-04-07 01:21 AM

Beautiful! I am so glad you caught my eye, now I don't have to think of the "If onlies ..."

Lovely!!!

Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

5 posted 2007-04-07 08:35 AM

This work fully "of heaven", completely yang -- of the "sunny place", alluding to the skies. Spun from pure light, it is active, upward moving, expanding, strong, and decidedly masculine. Bravo, Dreampoet!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2007-04-07 08:42 AM

lovely writing to warm a heart on such a cold Spring morning~~

M

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2007-04-07 10:09 AM

...another

from an exemplary dream poet! A love poem extraordinaire!!! You put the "P" in poet and the "R" in romance!
I absolutely adore this offering from your illustrious quill!

To love & romance in the Milky Way!

Linda

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2007-04-07 01:49 PM

Ah...yes...the beauty of the heavens always inspire the heart that has been touched by love when the eyes have been opened to see beyond this mortal realm...your brush paints unearthly visions that are a delight to the senses...Well done...*Big hugs*

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2007-04-08 08:05 AM

~sigh~ rainbow-dance smiles light the skies

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

10 posted 2007-04-08 01:57 PM

"If only....

I could touch your lovely heart
with my mind’s epiphany...
so you might truly ‘know’ me!....."

you write with such delicacy
and yet such substance

beautiful poet!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2007-04-08 02:06 PM

This is highly enjoyable indeed!

With all the finest ingredients to make it impactful on hearts ready to listen.

Very very nice job!

Love,
Margherita

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