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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-04-05 09:55 AM

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Sea in swell
Waves not quite breaking
On the shore

Heaving over wreckage
Remnants from other loves

Beneath the light
Of an autumn moon


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-04-05 12:22 PM

indifference... let along a cold "winter" was coming. at least a poem seriously recorded this.

so very good. read several times still it tasted bitter.
The Lady
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2 posted 2007-04-05 08:33 PM



"Waves not quite breaking
On the shore"

harsh and so good
Huan Yi
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3 posted 2007-04-05 09:32 PM

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Thank you both,

And yet odd
as I wrote this
in a moment of compassion

Thank you again

John


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Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-04-06 11:08 AM

If I am worng:

the emotion has no much passion.
let along a lot of hurts.
an old man sighed for those young "silly" lives.
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