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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Rain falls and then it falls again; earth’s now a better place growing from the bottom up into a state of grace ~ but in that time of moisture’s fall boughs broke and suffered more. Lo, oh, lo, and this behold each raindrop has to fall upon the face of innocence to feel and taste it all. And simply so life grows again sooner, later, matters not; the summer, winter, rose of soul springs forth from mud and rot. Lo, oh, lo, and this behold I’m like a stream, you see, flowing with a ripple, stone, to the majestic sea. And simply so love grows again in the land of spirit feel if you believe it went away while flowing to the sea! Helen / 5 April 2007 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Helen You are a marvel this... And simply so life grows again sooner, later, matters not; the summer, winter, rose of soul springs forth from mud and rot. So true, and magically painted...yanno, sometimes when we loose, we win, and times when we think we've won, we loose...yet the balance, to me, all seems so predetermined...like everything falling into place, easily...our lives can sometimes take on qualities of a dream... you've done it again, with that inspirational pen of yours..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another beautiful write I love it! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a true singing in the rain. full of life. "I’m like a stream, you see, flowing with a ripple, stone, to the majestic sea."...love this! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Lo, oh, lo, and this behold each raindrop has to fall upon the face of innocence to feel and taste it all. And simply so life grows again sooner, later, matters not; the summer, winter, rose of soul springs forth from mud and rot.' Helen, dear one, I love the wisdom you've written in this beauty. "rose of soul" ... yes!  .....jo |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
this is such a simply beautiful poem, such truths are held here. beautiful. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for your kind comment and, yanno LeeJ, "life is but a dream", a large and expansive one but a dream nevertheless but just wait until I get my hands on the one who has dreamt it!  |
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