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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-04-04 10:52 PM

Some Women

Some women
by just the way
they touch you
tell you a lot.

If you miss them
when they pull away
perhaps they have
something that
you want.

JamesLee
04April
2007

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

1 posted 2007-04-04 10:53 PM

That sounds like something from a zen book of poetry JM. I like its brevity.

My child's smile tells me there's still hope

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2007-04-04 11:21 PM

perhaps James

or... maybe for sure

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-04-05 08:53 AM

yep!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-04-05 09:22 AM

Aloha, Island Man!

"If you miss them
when they pull away
perhaps they have
something that
you want."

~ Men always seem to want what they can't have!

It's the hunter in them, I believe! They love to conquer and to conquer in love.

Linda

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-04-05 11:58 AM

how true. do not wait till they pulled away.

enjoyed

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2007-04-06 02:41 AM

Yep, that sounds about right, JamesLee...but it took me awhile to learn that...hehehe. *smiles*.....jo

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

7 posted 2007-04-06 03:58 AM

beautifully stated and so true.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2007-04-06 06:41 PM

Truth is told through the touch, I agree.

And you have learned your lessons!

Nice job.

Love,
Margherita

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

9 posted 2007-04-07 04:11 PM

Oh, very nicely done! Short, and simple, and elegantly phrased.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2007-04-09 04:31 AM

all true words here James

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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