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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Little breeds From sour seeds Growing discontent From different fields And assorted beds Progressing In disillusionment A fallow gray attraction Worn in older clothes Vintage dissatisfaction Yet only their pillows know What wanting burning That mutually yearning A plane in torrid throes . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
for some reason, reading this gave me the feeling that everything will be okay for me probably not your intention but thanks |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yeah, same here, I agree totally with Dixie Well done you have a way with words |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
you always have the ability to dig out the truth to reveal the soul. must sighed out with an empty bottle. a very good poem but I felt so sad. only 85 is allowed to pen chaos and time |
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