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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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pronoia of God that thing on the moon gathering data with homesick mind twin centers of humanity clustered babyhood trained by silence gazing intently northward composed of some semblance of flying men what follows that brand upon me? simultaneously drawn like frozen marble burning whiteness the will to know rising on swells beginning to build growths of mangroves timeshared pyramids strewn invisible but with vast forces of sacred places panic stricken, threatened yet, to infected to turn back like caution slipping through my fingers, a faint chanting of waves rolling over rocks somewhere enormous rapture deep breasted an archaic movement thrusting me back back beyond the curious gesture of a mother's distance suggesting great power she points to a place void of dreams man's reasoning a monster oddly sullen admitting supernatural fabricated for the half wondering there were lights but no sighs of life the rose concealing its mighty sea gate she is of memory dynastic name of race ancient, tinted smooth but peculiar to man oddly, frozen electricity neighboring guilt for thrusting stones into the courtyard ancient formation, entirely inaccurate gentile women who fed the eucharist meal I know the affirmations denied faith and chastity are things no man can claim the anima voice of god, becomes the animas, and it appeared before the prophet in feminine form it was much deeper than man could account man was smitten with power dripping like prophetic visions from his mouth saliva let us witness violence against her body, claiming power opinionated struggle of a spiritual journey I don't believe woman to be lower case offering but physical intimacy there is so much more elements common to man, that man could not suffer without mediator of wisdom are ethics of freedom thru spiritual development brings unity apart from gender status human suffering is caused by man alone integral with the spiritual escaping the counterfeit enslaving souls in ignorance through sexual & biased domination over prophetic oracles erased yet the dead is alive remarkable how much indication breathes upon the survived well organized endeavors to stab torture and wipe away the anima |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ WE never get over the pain of being born. Well done.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
First, I thought, "pronoia?" Does she mean Paranoia? Then I thought for what seemed like an eternity but was actually a minute or so, that if God is ominiscient and ominipotent, why would God be paranoid? ZAP--yanno? So I thought I'd look it up, and nope, it wasn't in the dictionary--but it WAS in the encyclopedia. (Now I ask you, how can a word have an entire index listing and not even rate a dictionary entry? Doesn't make sense, but it's early and I'm grumpy.) and YOU MADE ME THINK...OUCH and for everybody else: http://www.reference.com/search?r=13&q=Pronoia and I loved the timeshare pyramids Lee. You, me, and some peyote? Oh YEAH, lady!  Every single line of you is worthy of a conversation. (and even if you meant "paranoia", consider the typo divine intervention, because the explanation is insightful, fitting and lovely)  Miss you lady. |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ That was exactly what i thought...Although i dident do research about it. It was mind bottleing none the less. THANK YOU My mind is like lightning |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lady, it is ALWAYS a pure treat reading you. I would love to just chat over a good cup of java some day. You are a delight. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: I'm always left wondering as to the wanderings of your mind, the depths of imagery and the intricate thought patterns you present. This multi-layered write is no exception! LeeJ, thank you for sharing!!! And thanks to our sister serenity for provding that 'pronoia' link! I had similar initial thoughts regarding the word spelling, wondering about the big G's paranoia. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
lol @ sistah kacy! The Big G's Paranoia if you don't write that poem you don't have a hair on your...lass?  (*ahem* sorry, Lee. ya'll proceed) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 I swear, your a hoot this is about the ancient cover up of women's strength in Christianity and leadership...to this day, this very day, some men fear strength, confidence and wisdom in women. and I don't know why, cuz woman is the other half of them, yanno? http://www.emotions.64g.ru/bokat/bken.htm anima, animus miss ya to many thanks to all of you for taking a looksee I believe in God, most certainly, but believe Woman was also created in HIS image and surpressed by fear, used, and tormented for thousdands of years. They were feared by the men of Religion, mostly...and thousands were tortured for being out spoken (wise and had a concept for spirituality) It is not only about sexual intimacy...people have been looking for their better half for years...when all along, that better half exists deep inside of them.... the concept of a woman being married to Jesus is not all that absurd.... God is a just God...surpressing woman, was man's demise and separation from spirituality, let alone, understanding it. maybe that is why some men (not all) are so weak? They are contantly looking for that true love...yet, upon finding it, completely and purposely sabotage it, going forward, to another, then another...and another, not understanding, what lies within Happy Easter Everyone |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness! A very thought-provoking poem that has engendered a plethora of fascinating replies ~ including your own! This entire post is positively profound and noteworthy!  Your mind is almost as expansive as your spirit!  Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I knew the moment I opened your poem, that I would have been fascinated and stuck and stirred and in awe of your poetic richness. This is all so interesting, that I will surely be back to read it all over. Love, Margherita thank you, it's good to find you here too!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
well LeeJ you sure know how to draw a crowd and keep their attention yes! I love this work! Happy Easter to you too! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I wish I had half of the diction that you have poised, just raring to go.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
okay...I read this when you posted but didn't want to be the first one replying...I wanted to wait to hear what others said... and really, right now, I am a sheet to the wind and can't begin to comprehend but I'll be back in time again great piece here, I know it...but need to absorb it more fully when I am in my right mind |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thought provoking Love the title!! JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I'll be back to this one too for another read - you do force us to ... concentrate, yanno? Always a fascinating journey through your thoughts. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*grin*...oh how I love the way you think...this is a wonderful poem designed to make us think...I love it...*Big Hugs* |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
These are the poems of thought-filled process... and I love 'em when they come from you!  Happy Easter, dear. |
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