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Ah, April Moon
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Ah, April Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah dear Marge~This is incredibly beautiful! Now this has become a new favourite of mine from you. I do indeed deem this a keeper. Hugs & Love, Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow. execellent! you poem makes the moon shine brigher tonight. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
A full mooon is such a beautiful thing and your words reflect that romance. Rae |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
as eloquent as your words. Hugs Kimberly |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Marge, this is just beautiful. You have always been so talented. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Most beautiful, the moon and the poem, twin orbs! martyjo |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is the only place I will get to see the April moon I think. we have had such cloudy weather and had snow yesterday. However, It couldn't be more beautiful that this one and the poem is lovely! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is so very pretty Marge... (I just wish one of the orbs had been blue, for Earth.) But your choice is probably right--people tell me I over-complicate things. grin Over-complicate? It's either complicated or it ain't, right? I rank that right up there there with "over-exaggerate." laughing I'm a teensy tipsy. Check the time. sigh But I love the contrast of the black and yellow, and yes'm, it works for me. I'll go try to be have. *hic* (wince....sorry)  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a Spring delight thanks for sharing |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hmmm, amazingly beautiful read...loved this |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lovely sights Marge. TD |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, Friends~ All I did was point the camera and *click* ... that April Moon was just glowing gold ... waiting for the lens-capture~ Then letting my words reflect her beauty was the next natural thing to do~ Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it~ I am 'Luna'~ (not to be confused with 'Loony', which may also apply)  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Si, tu sei LUNA! Magical picture and magical words, offered in an amazing circle ... perfection! Love and hugs, Luna! Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge You have a mind full of magic. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this is your time to shine Marge and you have once again |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
first of all, the words alone are beautiful, but added with the form of the moon that you created, well, it becomes amazing and magical. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you could do a book just with your poems of the moon! beautiful as always Marge |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is oh so skillfully done and is beautiful. Joyce |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think serenity has the right idea....we need to start promoting the blue, too! But an excellent and resplendant moon she was. Only I didn't get to see her in this shade, as we only see her in that color in the midwest, in the autumn. She was pure, and white, in our area. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a moon! Marge, you gift us with so much beauty! TY.......*hugs*..........jo |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
The moon and it's aura, has always found a place in my writings...I almost feel an inspiration, just staring at a full moon, as if it begs me to write...awsome write. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Hello, dear friend!!! You have done it again. You have captured the moon and gift wrapped it just for me. Thanks!!! ~~Big Hugs~~ ~Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Ella Blue Junior Member
since 2006-05-26
Posts 47 |
It seems trite, to describe a poem as pretty, but this really is...pixie-ish, piquant,perfect and..pretty |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh yes....You know I love it...you have such a talent to capture the magic of the moon...BRAVO...*Big Hugs* |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
Thank you Marge, that was lovely. I really do enjoy reading your work. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Beautiful!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well you certainly captured that glorious April moon with both your camera and your pen!  Such lunar splendor! EO |
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