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little dream
Junior Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 10

0 posted 2007-04-03 02:55 AM

the lips i taste
on a rainy night
as cold it was
she held me tight
but then she paused
and the night was done
she said we're only friends
and then she was gone

a world so full
of the unlovely truth
with passions so fierce
what do i do
standing alone
in the pouring rain
crying outloud
going insane

before the night
we had gone on dates
when she first grabbed my hand
i knew it was fate
our first kiss was spontaneous
it happened so quick
i was washed by her words
and then came in the bliss
i never thought
the end was near
the last time i heard her voice
i was standing here

a world so full
of the unlovely truth
with passions so fierce
what do i do
standing alone
in the pouring rain
crying outloud
going insane

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-04-03 08:32 AM

wow! what a great first posting here!

Welcome to Passions. I will be reading more of your work! Hope you enjoy it here.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2007-04-03 10:13 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your entrance post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

3 posted 2007-04-03 10:17 AM

I really liked this, it captured me in a subtle way and held on tight. This is really good.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-04-03 12:48 PM

welcome the this wonderful place.
a heart song.
i loved the poem.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-04-05 10:48 PM

Nice...James

little dream
Junior Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 10

6 posted 2007-04-08 03:33 AM

thanks...i'll be posting more with emotional and visual perspective such as this one and others..

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

7 posted 2007-04-08 09:57 AM

Very deep and heartfelt first post! I have been in the same place before, and your words captured the feeling exactly. Welcome to passions, my friend, and we do hope you will make it your home, too!

I will be waiting to read more of your excellent work...

~Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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