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Open Poetry #40

Of My Sweetheart

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-04-02 10:36 PM

Of My Sweetheart

To her I express the joy
the comfort that I feel,
to share in the pleasure
while partaking of the treasure
of my sweethearts warm caress.

JamesLee
02April
2007

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2007-04-02 10:53 PM

Oh *sigh*....just lovely James!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-04-02 11:41 PM

VERY nice!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-04-03 08:34 AM

a very happy and comforting piece

wonderfully written!

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

4 posted 2007-04-03 02:15 PM

sweet, tender and wonderfully penned. evoking an emotion in the reader...beautiful.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2007-04-03 03:04 PM

JamesMichael~
Sounds perfectly LOVERLY~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-04-03 05:41 PM

oh James...

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