Soft Shoes and Shimmering Sands

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Open Poetry #40

Soft Shoes and Shimmering Sands

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2007-04-02 09:52 PM

Time marches….shuffling softly into the sunset…whispering at the arch of dawn...Lying in wait of the moon’s lingering tears that hum a solitary tune and share
The sway of wayward ghostly limbs…slowly budding as the moon’s light
Shares the sway of wayward limbs and stark silhouettes.

And, perched upon a wooden pedestal….a solitary figure…allowing the
Sift of finest grains to fall as fingers stir the pot and eyes absorb the stars of A cool cosmic
night….and the band….softly,...assuredly….plays on…

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-04-02 10:38 PM

Enjoyed...James

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2007-04-02 10:51 PM

Yes...the band played on...
well done Barry.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-04-03 08:19 AM

vivid and beautifully descriptive

I do love your words

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2007-04-03 11:36 AM

Magnus~

'whispering at the arch of dawn'

Oh my ... how lovely is this ... VERY !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2007-04-03 05:30 PM

oh yes Barry

this one touches a place I had almost forgotten

"and the band….softly,...assuredly….plays on…"

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