Open Poetry #40 |
Love |
marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Love I delay opening my eyes every morning, Hesitant to acknowledge the sun’s smile For fear your love was just a dream; But again I am blessed to inhale you by my side, Sleeping peacefully you lay so beautiful; And though these golden drops escape my eyes, It is to you I credit this saddened joy, Because I know for at least this day, You are real…… Marcel |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
this was my favorite read of the day, mainly the last line, its got a real nice touch of innocense to it which is forgotten alot,,,,, very nice |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Keith, it's really good to read you again you sound happy and I'm so glad for that |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcel~ Can you hear me *sigh* ? The soft sincerity of this does that~ Lovely thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Vast, the dreams begin, turning wishes into reality. Striking this; in so soft spoken the reverence. Hugs, TD |
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