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Open Poetry #40

04/01/07

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2007-04-01 10:54 AM

As the evening sun sets in the east
people rise from their beds with a yawn.
Realizing too late their mistake,
if it's evening what happened to dawn?

Like, the sun should be way over there,
for the evening sun sets in the west,
or, at least that is what we've been taught
one can only surmise it's a test.

Like the ones we took "back in the day"
studied hard to get everthing right
'spose things haven't changed much after all
don't know difference 'tween morning and night

As back then when one's sleeping through school
Yesterday we'd have not been such fools.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-04-01 01:09 PM

interesting and thought-provoking write here

like it a lot

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2007-04-01 02:07 PM

aha, and what happens 'tween dawn and dusk
scents a life in lavender and musk

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-04-01 03:15 PM

Perfect for April 1!

Whenever we can get a break from routine, it does us good!

Love,
Margherita

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

4 posted 2007-04-03 01:13 PM

My thanks to you all, I see you're all well versed at keeping secrets.
Doc

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