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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-03-31 06:06 PM

          Stormy Haiku

    Liquid lightnings dance
with the thunder-demon winds
      to rainbow's rapture!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-03-31 06:21 PM

perfectly describes today here in Florida

lovely poem

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2007-03-31 07:55 PM

Your haiku, senryu, and tanka writes are delightful reads!
These poetic forms allow for a fantastic array of visual imagery
and poet-reader interactions with a mere handful of words.

A slightly different 'twist' of your words and imagery produced this:

Rainbows in rapture!
Rhythmic thundering cadence,
Liquid lightnings dance!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-04-01 02:42 PM

I love both versions.

Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2007-04-01 03:28 PM

I think I've been converted! Never was a lover of the thunder storms we get here.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2007-04-01 07:36 PM

Wonderful! I very much enjoy this form myself.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-04-01 08:33 PM

It is very understandable why your 'stormy haiku' was the source of inspiration for Midnitesun's own wonderful write!

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-02-2007 01:04 AM).]

unholyjudgement
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since 2007-02-27

Posts 116
Wherever my soul takes me next

7 posted 2007-04-02 09:10 AM

I was never one for haiku's. however i loved this one

My mind is like lightning
One brilliant flash and its gone

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

8 posted 2007-04-02 09:39 PM

I so love a good storm.
Thank you for sharing your creation!

INclan

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2007-04-03 05:10 PM

love a good storm
love a good haiku

got both here poet

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