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Open Poetry #40

Deeply Indebted to Her

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-03-31 02:56 PM

    my tooth ache's and ache's for this girl

and it hurts badly enough to tempt me to curl

around another sweetie pie when i'm lonely

                       if only

the thought of which didn't make me realize

that without her my surface lies

at the bottom of our Indian Ocean

              where hope cries

for her lovely eyes

               to appreciate me

                                                             love,

                                                            howard

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2007-03-31 03:19 PM

Such deep longing, so well rendered!

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-03-31 04:59 PM

cool write Howard

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-04-02 06:11 PM

"my tooth ache's and ache's for this girl"

If love was a tooth ache feeling then I should give up.

enjoyed

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

4 posted 2007-04-02 07:47 PM

thanks guys

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