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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 More To cross the river of indifference I will swim right into awareness where all the whirling stops and the heart wins over the mind. Where perceptions flow free like crystal clear waterfalls, bringing the gift of lucidity revealing the perfect reality. There is more to life than what meets the eye … To touch the very essence in which all life is rooted I’ll call upon the great silence and upon the vast void. I’ll cut all the boundaries which define my illusions. I will ban from my soul all the melancholy accumulated in endless nights of longing. There is more to life than what meets the eye … I know for I have caught a glimpse of those portals to eternity while I explored ethereal routes on iridescent wings of butterfly. Like ripe red apples glowing on a tree the stars twinkle on the firmament inviting me to decode their mystery. I transcend the known itineraries and in audacious determination I move into Life, I move into You. * * * Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! What a beauty! So enjoyed this! And the ending...fantastic! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Margherita Are you aware of how much I admire you? Your frequent touching replies, and your not often enough poems! Thank you for both!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ My friend, my friend ... this is absolutely stunning~ So beautiful a share from you ... thank you~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
what a beautiful writing! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita You see how you effect people?  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Margherita, the painting is perfectly matched with your wonderfully phrased poem. Many times through your work I've seen that we have some common thoughts -- this poem is one I will save to treasure again and again. *hugs*....jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Margherita - Your poem has given me some clarity and especially this: "I transcend the known itineraries and in audacious determination I move into Life, I move into You." I've been there, done that, but didn't know the "how". Thank you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow Margherita, this is exquisitely beautiful! Very nicely done! For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear Poet friends. Your generous replies warm my heart. Love and Joy. Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this is simply stunning |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I want "More" and more of your writing! It fluffs up my aura and feeds my soul! I am not only saving this glorious poem of "lucidity", love and Light in my Library, I am also tucking it into a special folder on my computer!  Your spirit and talent are glowing!  Linda |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I can but concur with the magnificently appropriate comments already posted (by so many fine ‘P.I.P.’ poets) pursuant to this ‘write’ ! I dearly, grandly LOVE imagery such as: “the river of indifference” and: “To touch the very essence in which all life is rooted I’ll call upon the great silence and upon the vast void. I’ll cut all the boundaries which define my illusions. “ If I can but once write like this..... I might somehow magically transmogrify into a real ‘poet’ to dance forever along that immortal plane where this poem lives! GRAND applause!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it's all been said Margherita which is fine for I am left speechless anyway |
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paullallady Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 262Michigan |
so beautiful! Your wording and phrasing is amazing. It holds such profound truths and a deep sensuality too. I loved this. |
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unholyjudgement Member
since 2007-02-27
Posts 116Wherever my soul takes me next |
the imagery was wonderful in this piece although i couldent see the picture my school server is retarded. Although it sounds beautiful. My mind is like lightning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
100% loved this and that picture is fantastic!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a joy to read your loving replies, my Poet friends! Thank you! Love, Margherita |
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lightkeeper Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 100pluto |
We are contained within everything and everything is contained within us.... may you continue to freely flow and touch everything with the very essence of love.... You have freely flowed through my heart and touched it . Thankyou Love Bernadette x |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
Margherita, This was a beautiful poem. The picture and your words conjured magic in this piece. Please take a bow you have earned it. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! This is a masterpiece with vision designed to transport the soul to higher realms...*Big Hugs* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you from my heart dear Bernadette, Jennifer and Startime for the loving comments. Love, Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And skipping through and between the crystal clear waterfalls and gazing at all the kaleidoscopic prisms they cast off into the valley is exactly where I love being too, yay, you always offer so much more gorgeous imagery and jovial wisdom here, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love...James |
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