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Lost Inside My Brain ( My first attempt)
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Lost Inside My Brain ( My first attempt) |
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Joty Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 15Florida |
LOST INSIDE MY BRAIN My mind is just spinning Its our of control No idea where I am going Its really taking it toll. Taken over my brain Took over my heart I feel so insane No idea where to start. His temper; his outbursts Always the same Don't know what to do I'm lost in my brain. Can't take anymore Can"t cope or refrain I'm leaving this mess Lost inside my brain. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Hi Joty  welcome to Passions! I'm sure you will love it here! Sad poem...been there, done it...wasn't even worth it tempers just turn me totally off now that I'm older and wiser...I have no time for a man with them good write |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Joty, Welcome and wonderful first poem. I burned my first one it was so bad. It will be fun to watch you develop as a writer -- and Dixie is pretty smart, I'll go with what she said (again) Alison |
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Joty Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 15Florida |
Thanks ....will try again...Think I will like it here...Helps to vent... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joty~ Welcome to this wonderful world of poetic friendships~ Hope we see lots more of you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Joty, Passions is a wonderful place, to vent, or to grow, your choice. Please, check your email for a very special greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to Passions. I am sure you will like it here. There are so many nice people. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
let the brain follow the heart then one has oneself found. beautiful. enjoyed. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a really fine first post, and I hope to read many many more from you in the future. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
Jody, venting leads to a love and passion to write. I'm glad you have begun that journey. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hello and welcome to PIP a very poignant write can tell you, I run, run, run as fast as I can from temper and outbursts...it is much more productive to sit down and talk things over...peacefully.... |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
I'm with Dixie if you want to throw a tantrum do it somewhere else. My life has been filled with situations like that but now I'm old enough and strong enough to end them before they begin. "The only way to learn to fly is to spread your wings and jump." |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Thank you for the post... I love the feel of it. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, joty! Welcome aboard the PiP Ship ~ your new home away from home! Thank you for sharing your feelings with us! That was a pretty good "first attempt"!  Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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