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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2007-03-30 12:55 PM

if the nightingales could sing like you
they'd sing much sweeter than they do

    ~ Kahal

picture this

stars whispering in the night air
smell of jasmine calling
an oaken rocker
sleepy head on your shoulder
bare toes entwined with yours

you sing to my heart
...lady

strong arms make a home
your voice a place to sleep
dreams lie heavy on my eyelids
your nightsong wraps me

it’s pictures like this
that keep me awake

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-03-30 01:28 AM

beautiful. make my heart calm and quiet.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2007-03-30 07:36 AM

oh Kate I do feel such a lovely ache in these words....beautiful sweetie.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

3 posted 2007-03-30 08:05 AM

   A lovely Shangrila, Milady

        stars whispering in the night air
        smell of jasmine calling
        an oaken rocker
        sleepy head on your shoulder
        bare toes entwined with yours

   Peaceful and beautiful images to soothe the soul. Your wonderful words take me there

         MoonShadow
.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-03-30 09:06 AM

very soothing and peaceful write

awesome!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2007-03-30 09:06 AM

You make me want to pull out my books
of Gibran,

and indulge.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-03-30 11:45 AM

thank you Drauntz

you feel that ache do you gentle Donna?
I knew you would

thank you Sir MoonShadow
I am happy you can be there

thank you so much Dixie

Karilea
let’s both indulge

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2007-03-31 11:22 AM

With such wonderful visions, it must be worth to stay awake!

Love your nightsong, Lady, it has a touch of magic.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2007-04-01 05:29 PM

I can picture it well, for you have scribed it all so vividly! Your words are like the soft sigh of spring.

Warm hug 'n smile,
Linda

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

9 posted 2007-04-01 05:32 PM

Good poem, just be sure Im not the singer, wouldn’t help the nightmares with my voice

This poem sings to me though, lovely images

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2007-04-01 09:57 PM

Wonderful write.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2007-04-01 11:23 PM

oh yes! another gorgeous Lady write
(Khalil quote?) /font>

unholyjudgement
Member

since 2007-02-27

Posts 116
Wherever my soul takes me next

12 posted 2007-04-01 11:46 PM

Pure beauty

My mind is like lightning
One brilliant flash and its gone

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

13 posted 2007-04-03 05:51 PM

thank you Margherita
it is all pure magic

thank you Linda Angel
it’s my fondest dream

thank you Dennis
I’m happy it sings to you

thank you TD

thank you Kacy
actually not Gibran
but a line from that old standard
“You Brought a New Kind of Love to Me”
by Irving Kahal
and it is a new kind of love

thank you unholy

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