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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Day After Day The difference is the same running on empty towards that inside pain Ache settling in... needing you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-13-2007 11:02 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A few very strong words. Good wwrite |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well written M. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great write. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well I'm sending my angel posse out to lassoo him and bring him back! You can get your tank filled and then you can send him right back! We can't have our little Naked One running on empty! May this new year be filled with bright new beginnings!  Giving you a great big warm hug, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so short and so powerful |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Puts hand on chest I too have that ache.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Maureen, I sure understand that pain. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Mo (that's right! You'll always be 'Mo' to me) - what a poignant thought you have penned so well! Beautiful, yet I wish you hadn't the need to write it. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"running on empty" hard way to go M strong poem |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW~! I felt this one, Maureen! Well penned. Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you guys for reading and responding...actually I am just so tired of "coughing" I am now beginning to sound like a goose...wearing me down...(no pun intended)   M ( Mo for LongJohn) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ache settling in... needing you. You've written me... and it's not always true that misery loves company... I wish this wasn't so powerful it has to be written from intimate knowledge. *S* |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I hear you girlfriend.... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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