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The Ides fo March
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The Ides fo March |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Ides of March The Ides of March have come and gone And left its shadows liaison They fell upon the ground in gray And made it hard to find my way I searched the forest of appease Watched the dancing of the leaves Made metaphors of what I could And stored my mind those understood An arrows time has pierced my heart And shred the canvas of my art I find no water left to drink The clouds within the mist past shrink And age does not forgive mistake It shrinks to dust the essence lake And once again becomes the grime To form again in chaos time And who can know what time will bring Or what will be the coming spring? |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
oh, time will sure bring lots and lots of good poems out of your intelligent brain...nurtured by your heart...colored by the seasons and with condensed emotion by your age. love to read. have a wonderful day! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
who can know indeed nice to read you Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And who can know what time will bring Or what will be the coming spring? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I heard a rumor that the moths and tinkerbells come in spring...and they bring *winkies*  oh and Randy says to tell you hes got spring fever and he wants you to keep up with him, so you better drink some extra raspberry tea!! LOL  I searched the forest of appease Watched the dancing of the leaves Made metaphors of what I could And stored my mind those understood An arrows time has pierced my heart And shred the canvas of my art I find no water left to drink The clouds within the mist past shrink ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ No one works cadence like you do me Sultan of the Sonnet *LOL* And age does not forgive mistake It shrinks to dust the essence lake And once again becomes the grime To form again in chaos time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ that verse is poetic brilliance...but then so are you. *S* *winkie winkie* me sweet Sy-babers love ya...and give a smooch to IssyB for me too. *S*  Now Im going back to my yard work... SPRING yard work...yayaya |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah dear Sy the Ides of March have indeed passed... and we're still here!  What's this??? Did you see who I just saw?? The gentle winds of Spring brought out our Janet Marie!! Please please ask her to write something Sy. She'll do it for you, and Randy..I know. Hugs for this lovely!  ~ Time has cast a spell on you, So you won't ever forget me. ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Enjoyed your reply, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing Thank you sweetie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet Marie Dearest Tink, Your comment is like a bowl of chicken soup. And there is nothing I could use more at this moment. Tell Randy I'd trade places with him if I could. Your reply is like a resporator to me, I don't know how long it will last but I thank you for it. You read me like no one else I know and I am thankful to you. Stay well and know you are always in my heart and mind. Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, You are a dear and I thank you so much for just being my friend.  |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Sy, Truly beautiful. I myself wonder what will be coming, but I think I'll take it as it does. I don't think I could handle knowing for certain.... Thanks for provoking some thought out of me today... Terry ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I find the following especiall fine!: "The Ides of March have come and gone And left its shadows liaison They fell upon the ground in gray And made it hard to find my way I searched the forest of appease Watched the dancing of the leaves Made metaphors of what I could And stored my mind those understood" I'm just not 'grammatically sure' about the last line above?! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
TerryW Thank you for the read and comment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Thank you for the read and comment. I always enjoy being quoted. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
So, sir Sy, does dislexia cause one to alter small words and turn them backwards? Nice write as always.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Your guess is as good as mine. Glad to see you here and hope you are doing well. |
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