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Open Poetry #40

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trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

0 posted 2007-01-13 01:24 AM

The abyss of my heart
Is enthralled by your undying love.
I absorb your tender kisses
With my lips.
The a-cappella beat
Of your heart, close to mine,
Reigns everlasting and true.
In the acclivity of my soul
Once more I whisper,
("Again, you will come").
The grandeur of your embrace,
The beauty of your touch.
I'll take hold of your hand
As we fly to heaven.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-13 01:27 AM

paradise awaits for those who believe sweet Bill... this was nicely penned.. RDB

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-01-13 01:40 AM

"I'll take hold of your hand
As we fly to heaven."

Excellent write.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-01-13 01:58 AM

you restore my faith in love sometimes yaknow?

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