Open Poetry #40 |
Becoming...No More |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I remember clearly this certain moment of becoming. When the world broke to separate distinctions, And the pride of being more filled a false sense of being. I believed in my self so strongly then...such power in the sudden awakening of a life above surroundings. Now years have fallen. The moment stands vivid in the fright of what seems lost. Once I was part of something larger than myself. Once I was whole...and broke apart. I remember now, And longing to return...I give myself away. Becoming...no more. |
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jak Member
since 2007-03-14
Posts 85Charlotte, NC |
"The moment stands vivid in the fright of what seems lost." intimate. Jak |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent expression Eric. Powerful write. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Most excellent Eric. ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Read: DEBRIS OF LIFE AND MIND by Wallace Stevens . |
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ChaoticHazeLight Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 71California, U.S. |
Excellence in your craft... but the feeling cuts deep... perhaps here you can be part of something larger than yourself... "take all of your pain and happiness and use it as your stepping stone" Learn from others and yourself and grow. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Once I was whole...and broke apart. I remember now," Not many do remember. Always enjoy your writes! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW. Stunning. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sure have missed reading you nice to see you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric The honesty in this is so sensitive, so fragile. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: There are those moments when we suddenly perceive the truth and the pain of feeling separated cuts deep. The wholeness of you, dear Eric, drips in beauty through your wonderful poetry. I love you. Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"The moment stands vivid in the fright of what seems lost." You've captured well the intensity of such moments. Be well, poet friend. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps in losing yourself, you are once again a part of the whole. ~ Outstanding piece of insightful writing!!! Take care and be well, Dear Poet! Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Once I was part of something larger than myself. Once I was whole...and broke apart. As always, your words touch me deeply. *S* |
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