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Love Quest! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Love Quest Dream-brush words paint life’s canvas in faded longing for a world where love and humility stand in truth, eternal sentinels passing not in a moment’s wisp of a long-lost kiss, like a book offered between us then forgotten, or dark dancers spinning past stain-glass promises shattered in the dust, and floating bells in sunset patterns singing twilight songs, while we apprehend the chill of shadow and comprehend the cold of love 'til morning shakes the slumbering dew of another desperate dawn! [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (03-21-2007 11:01 PM).] |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
touched me deeply. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
vivid and descriptive I like it |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your dream-brush palette tantalizes and delights, purring this cheshire cat.  |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This poem reads like a watercolor. My favorite part: "Time-mist kiss, like a book offered between us then forgotten," Exquisitely ephemeral -------- then, the dance -- dance being the most fugitive of the arts, an excellent reference here. Good work, Bruce! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
"I am a 'natural philosopher' Yes, your poetry reflects that,and the clear descriptions to detail explains the...environmentalist and trained 'field' scientist Your style intrigues me! |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Your intelligence bleeds onto the page. Nicely done Bruce. My suggestion would be to nix the "time-mist kiss" line; but that's only my little suggestion. I'll keep an eye out for your work. Cheers mate - Ed Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
This poem makes me think of the magical dreams I love to weave in my mind where the world rejoices in love, compassion and understanding....then reality opens eyes upon the natural world crying out in pain...mmm...I think I ramble here....I feel this vision and do my part to hear the music of this world that blesses us with so much beauty....Wonderful writing...**Big Hugs** |
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