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Open Poetry #40

Lonely Without You

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-03-20 08:17 AM

Lonely Without You

Its those hollow notes
A lonely heart sings
As emptiness echoes
Upon broken wings

For a heart cannot fly
On wings of depair
Sad songs play again
With you not there

I missed you so much
The nights are long
Sorrow my heartbeats
Playing a sad song

Could this be the end
Of your love I knew
Tears drown my heart
Lonely without you

Hope©2007
Link to the poem with music and graphic at the URL below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/104/poem_83868471.html

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-03-20 02:48 PM

I know that feeling

Jenna
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since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

2 posted 2007-03-20 03:01 PM

I think this is a beautiful poem, well done

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-03-20 07:21 PM

"tears down my heart". the sorrow is so deep.
shared your emotion.

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