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Thebaer Junior Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 10 |
Looping side holes Loving prairie voles Metal rapping Nooses tapping Lads a strapping Nothing knocks my door People seating Creeds a kneading Yet I’ve seen it all before Pride centers Demise enters No ones keeping score Worlds a wasting Children tasting Something newer than before Cries watering Eyes mottling Just a dollar more Ends ceasing The Man pleasing Only quiets the roar What I’m saying Needs untangling Come knock my door |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Knock, knock, knock. Welcome to come out here. I like your poem. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. There was something in your write that stirred my mind...to a cabin, in the woods, on a rainy summer night. Nicely done!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would love to get into a discussion with you; you've written the tomes of centuries passing, and passion amongst all of the lines incorporated therein. Welcome to Passions! Please, Check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Children tasting Something newer than before" I am sure this "untangling" is not about what came to my mind but for some reason this made me think of taking my grandson to the zoo and watching the prairie dogs play. I hope it is a comfort to know that poetry feeds different images to many. *wink wink* Welcome to Passions. I am sure you will see lots of great reads here you will enjoy and I look forward to more offerings of your work. Enjoyed. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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jak Member
since 2007-03-14
Posts 85Charlotte, NC |
its got a great rhythm Jak |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Welcome to passions, nice to read you!!! I think you will like it here....very interesting poem...  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very e a poe-ish...nicely done...enjoy your style |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much enjoyed this welcome! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I very much enjoyed your entrance post. Looking forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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