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Open Poetry #40

Stretching to Understand

howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-03-17 04:48 PM

          her heart's fantastic

i wish i was her Plastic Man

but i'm afraid my art's too drastic

if only i had a more elastic plan

               to win her

                                                love,

                                                howard

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2007-03-17 05:32 PM

Enjoyed...

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

2 posted 2007-03-17 06:28 PM

and yet again you inspire me!!! You'll win!! No doubt!!! Take Care JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2007-03-17 07:29 PM

Well done, I enjoyed how simple and to the point this was. Look forward to more.

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

4 posted 2007-03-18 02:38 PM

thanks guys

hi julie

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

5 posted 2007-03-19 08:16 AM

I adore the stretch in this piece. *wink wink*
("Plastic Man ... elastic plan" <---clever!

Very fun read here.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

jak
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since 2007-03-14

Posts 85
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2007-03-19 03:04 PM

i find myself singing these lines almost when i read them. feels like the kick to a song

Jak
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