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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-01-12 08:58 AM

In Intimate Candlelight

With perfume bubbles
All over the skin
If you care to join me
Then come on in

Soft bubbling essence
The feelings bliss
Share the tub for two
Enter with a kiss

As tantalizing bubbles
Soothingly caress
Feeling essential oils
Release the stress

As sensual ripples flow
Slide alongside me
In intimate candlelight
Make love tenderly

Hope©2007
Link to the poem with music and graphic at the URL Below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/104/poem_83852682.html

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-01-12 09:00 AM

beautiful write!

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2007-01-12 09:03 AM

Thanks dixie , its the romantic in me wishful thinking

Hope

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-01-12 05:41 PM

Aha...so this is how you spend your free time...James

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2007-01-12 10:33 PM

Thanks James , I wish I did

Hope

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-01-13 01:25 AM

ooh Hope!! this was very romantic!

RDB

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

6 posted 2007-01-13 01:28 AM

Damn..I need to get some bath salts etc..Nice write it brought some ideas that i can use in my personal life. Nice poem!

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2007-01-13 01:42 AM

Very nice.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

amberhues
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since 2006-11-01

Posts 93

8 posted 2007-01-13 04:29 PM

A very soft and sensual poem. Lovely.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2007-01-13 10:28 PM

Hope, this is lovely.

Well done!

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

10 posted 2007-01-13 11:30 PM

And if it's Toe you've written for,
Hoping he'll leave his clothes upon your floor,
Remember, the only ring he'll promise you,
Will circle the tub when he's through.

Other than that... you have written a very sensual, visual poem must... get... image... of... Toe... in... a... bathtub... out... of... my... head...

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

11 posted 2007-01-14 05:38 PM

   "Share to tub for two
       Enter with a kiss"

   Lovely sensual write... exquisite visions.. I'm ready with my entrance fee and willing to pay double.

             MoonShadow
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2007-01-14 05:55 PM

Very lovely Hope!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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