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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Poetry The tallow of a poet’s piece Off burns a wick of ambergris A prison passing white lights view To bring the bright of colors through Lighting dark of shady hallows Waking minds those prone to wallow Signing chaos to a lease To bring a moment of surcease Spreading seeds for grass to grow Above the seeds a symbols crow Then watering the ground of store To bring about an Eden’s core While dancing to a life of rhyme He builds an alter for this time Offering up his worded rose With all the might at his dispose Hoping you will take his hand And dance with him the fifers’ band |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Sir Sey, care to dance? This is a lovely dance of words sweetie. Nicely done.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Thank you and you are the first on my card. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nice to read you this morning Sy. Good feel to this dance you describe, so well. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm next!! I'm next!!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The tallow of a poet’s piece Off burns a wick of ambergris A prison passing white lights view To bring the bright of colors through you are colors lighted through and through excellent piece Sy... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"While dancing to a life of rhyme He builds an alter for this time Offering up his worded rose With all the might at his dispose Hoping you will take his hand And dance with him the fifers’ band" Beautiful dear Sy! May I please have the next s l o w dance?   &  , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Poet! Aha! So that is how it is done! ~ and you should know, for you are a master at writing poetry! I would be honoured to take your proferred hand and dance away to the beat of the fifer's drum! Perhaps some of your poetic magic will rub off on me!  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Thank you so much for the read and reply. passing, You are next on my card. LeeJ, Thank you love and the top of the morning to you. Nancy For sure you have the next slow dance. Earth Angel I'm afraid it's the other way around. May some of your magic ability rub off on me. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A lovely dance through your words - about all I can manage in the heat we are experiencing in sunny South Africa. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch Thank you dear and I'm sory about the heat. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You honour me, Sir Poet with your generous comment! Let's just say that we are mutually appreciative of each other's poetic prowess! lol You're a sweetie, you truly are!  EA |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Always love your poetry..May not comment all the time, but rest assured if you are posting it i am reading it. Well done Sir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel trutodaraiders, A beautiful reply, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
whew... I'm late again Sir Sy you got any more room on your dance card I hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Not to worry you are on the card. Thanks for taking time for a reply. |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Love this Sy. If you don't mind dancing slowly...this new knee is pretty lazy...I'll be delighted to take a spin with you.  Bea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bea, The delight would be mine. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
how did this one get past me?? Sir Sy... a lovely piece here... would love to dance with you too - should I take a number and wait my turn?  RDB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB, Not to worry you are on the card. Thanks for the read. |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
You are a mater of passion. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I thank you so much Tom. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sy...dance with you? Of course! But I do have to disagree with one thing here...your poetry will be honored long after you are dead and gone, not just this moment Ruth I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write Semour. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And if is done this magic prance, then all who read shall surely dance!   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
hoot, LOL from your mouth to Gods ear. JL Thank you, thank you. Sunshine I'd hope so. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Offering up his worded rose With all the might at his dispose You have been such a faithful poet.... I often wonder where the well is, for I would like to drink from it. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Great lyrics as usual, Sy. You have such an incredible command of unusual words used in unexpected ways. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
The title says it all. Poetry indeed!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I think your well is purer than mine. LngJhnAg Thanks my friend you help me with my doubts. Krishankins You flatter me but I love it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ What sheer word-beauty you portray~ A lovely dance upon the page~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge You are so able. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Barefooted or with shoes? Excellent lines, enjoyed much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, So nice to read you, thank you my friend. |
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