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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. In some front unnatural line The trees along the road Stand against the fog So it is then the sun They are waiting for Their limbs Silently reaching Toward the sky Much the way Despite the years That know better Than to try The eyes will seek What and who is not Though even now The wary heart Can not imagine why . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (03-15-2007 12:02 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and all so perfectly natural..natures desire despite age, rank, or serial number, right? Fantastic right!!!! |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
You see things that many of us do not... and remind me to slow down and seek more. I rarely know what to say when responding to your poetry, as it is always wonderful. Yes, I'm a fan! Caroline |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thanks both Especially you Caroline, to whom I don't know what to say . . . John |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
always a fan -Juju |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks Juju . . . John . |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful images in the beginning, and then the final stanza brings in a certain ambiguity about what the topic really is... I read it a few times over, and the more I read, the more I seem to see. Nicely done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some things just are the way they are, without reason to seek reason at all you know I'm a fan too  |
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