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Hail of the Humans
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Hail of the Humans |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina 
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Hail of the Humans Demonic men filled with snarky bits of satire will drop from the sky to tell us how to float and be generally buoyant characters. Brainwaves slapped by a sac full of painless whiplash to wake up the senses; release the juices, make them stain less cherry while riding on sheets into the wind. And I said to the devil, "You better leave my spleen alone." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Brainwaves slapped by a sac full of painless whiplash to wake up the senses; release the juices, ___________________________________ one could almost call it a rude awakening, but sometimes we need that jolt back to reality.  |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was good! Thank you for commenting on my poem. |
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