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Open Poetry #40

Equanimity Of Desire

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-03-15 12:05 PM

Equanimity Of Desire

Yet, the heart has an intellect measured true to form
Sensing seasons through a hand in wintry mist made warm
Hearing, to the decibel, of silent volumes bleary pose
Ingrained of touch to troubled beat, imparting calm to woes

Yet, the heart contains the vision to be slow at start
Ultimately striking chord, a pounding breath may part
Most timely and remarkable, in pulse deep ebony
And coursing to the tune of time, in rhythm cordially

Yet, the heart unstoppable the drum of sweet desire
In give and take resiliency, yet compliment the fire
A drive compelled in jump-start grace sensing seasons through
To break in countless pieces still, each season to renew

Copyright Kkh 3/14/07

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-03-15 06:59 AM

BRAVO!!!!!
This seemed to me, multi dimensional

"Sensing seasons through a hand in wintry mist made warm" Brilliant!

"Most timely and remarkable, in pulse deep ebony And coursing to the tune of time, in rhythm cordially"

metaphsically profound!

this was like a touch of mystery with an echo effect...romance at it's best....

Very much enjoyed!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-03-15 11:58 AM

Self control?
Sometimes it's best.
But sometimes you just can't help yourself.
No?
Great write Kathy. Enjoyed.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2007-03-16 08:38 PM

And,  I do believe that Humpty Dumpty did
sit on a wall before he fell and had so
many cracks....

Like this a lot kiddo,  how well you work
the weather,  and all that goes with it.

HI U.

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

4 posted 2007-03-16 08:55 PM

I envy your talent, you know. Such eloquence and depth resides in your poetry.
Love this one muchly, I do.

Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

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