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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Engulfed...is this villiage in the outer reaches it "was" meditation on grand isles utterly absorbing in a crisp cornered sort of way.... until untrained queer feelings bookmarks intentions of some stranger's mind lurking, spitting pity disgust and yes, death as his gaze sweeps force at any image that paused with a crash of jaws undertaking the darkness leaving light as if it were some event ugly, bloody & mean sky was impotent seducing thoughts... hesitations... everything! how long can one sit on a stair of pursuading evil unpacking & cataloging the hiss of blood steaming from his wicked desire to kill? He did! Liken to an arch carved into the very nature of supernatural things like an aftermath of harrowing preditors teasing an inheritance of loss from the shadows of shape-shifters oh merciless glares shaking heads with sunken blood shot eyes whispering the hush of mental images standing helpless abandoned with a skeletal look spitting up desires that lead you down a road of dead ends and there in the mist of stench & rot blood secrets touch a rabid wolf with wonderlust for the hunt I say Death to Death [This message has been edited by LeeJ (03-15-2007 06:32 AM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"whispering the hush of mental images standing helpless abandoned with a skeletal look spitting up desires that lead you down a road of dead ends and there, in the mist of stench & rot blood secrets touch a rabid wolf with wonderlust for the hunt" I got goose-bumps. Seems to be a new format for you? JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"bookmarked intentions of some stranger's mind" The strong longings and impulses of a killer is mind-boggling and extremely frightening and one that I do not understand, yet I see them daily on my TV and they haunt me. ("shape-shifters" - excellent description) Powerful writing here. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"how long can one sit on a stair of pursuading evil unpacking & cataloging the hiss of blood steaming from his wicked desire to kill? amazing work LeeJ |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Oddly enough - this reminded me of a tsunami, and I have often thought of the mind of certain types of psychotic killers as having "tsunami urges", where something shifts inside and the end result is something unstoppable, devastating, deadly. how long can one sit on a stair of pursuading evil unpacking & cataloging the hiss of blood steaming from his wicked desire to kill? Brilliant write LeeJ Caroline |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hello All, and thanks so much for your comments...yes, this is about the mind of a killer...been going thru some difficult times of late...family members...and I've been in a slump. A very close girlfriend wrote a book called Dead On which is about a psychotic murderer who has come back in several lives to do his work of despair and fear...also, had in mind death....and so, I suppose, I've given death a body in this...all of these things were on my mind, including the movie "Unusual Suspect". So, yes, JL, this isn't my usual, but upon this mood, I do like to dabble with dark poetry.  Thanks to you all for your eyes and encouraging words of support. Hugs to you all, hope all is well with you and yours. Luv Lee J. |
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