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You are a liar.
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You are a liar. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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I said to myself in the mirror, convicted, of treason against your own humility. You are scum, that carries the weight of the world in dirtiness. One moment of realization, came a flood of tears. One moment of reliance, came a flood of fears. I said to myself in the mirror, resolution, to learn from these mistakes. You are forgiven, that should carry your hopes to grow stronger. You were a liar, as your ways have now changed. Forgive yourself and love thyself, the world will tumble after. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wow!! Kellie... strong emotions here! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to read you again  |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Thought that if this poem was in a different format that the poem would be better. Your words where strong and i liked the poem |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hi sweet Kellie, Happy new year. I pray all is well. I enjoyed the write and it's good to see you again. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Don't be so hard on yourself....we are but human....and all things bring light.....Take care..JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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