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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The noon air On now bare arms Is cool as a draft Of spring water Ice free The lake is blue As far as the eye can see Without covers We lay for hours Together In each other’s arms I walk the park More than a little Absentmindedly Still under The influence Of last night’s dream . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 excellent! |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Goodness, I am REALLY enjoying your stuff! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you have an uncanny ability to say deep things in simplicity, thus stretching the horizons of the usual...well done...thoroughly enjoyed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I sit here with gawking jaw, this was written with stunning images fixated on a happy face... |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
John you have amazing talent. And this piece... well... just.... *sigh* Caroline |
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