(I'd Love) Frying without You

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Open Poetry #40

(I'd Love) Frying without You

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-03-12 07:59 PM

how could i see through your swirl of litigating questions

                you constantly had me guessing

were you a curse

                             or a blessing

should i feel worse that your Wesson's

                              gone away

or should i rehearse enough to delicately say

                                  i'm sorry

                                                             love,

                                                             eve

[This message has been edited by howardtsu (03-13-2007 06:44 PM).]

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2007-03-17 05:31 PM

Well done! Bump this to the top...

misC

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

2 posted 2007-03-17 06:29 PM

No rehearsals necessary...Your apology is surely to win him over!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

3 posted 2007-03-18 11:01 AM

"should i feel worse that your Wesson's <---great descriptive line here

gone away"

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

jak
Member

since 2007-03-14

Posts 85
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2007-03-18 11:47 AM

very complete.

Jak
Argonaut - My Poetry Blog

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