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James McInerney Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 83 |
Rapture Oh rapturous spirit how I watch thee dance, Through the sky you glide with elegance, Untouched by pain, Overwhelmed by love, Your chains of hate, Have come undone. Oh rapturous spirit so divine and free, Come dance this way, Come dance with me. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahhh, a free spirited dance. It sounds lovely James. Nicely done. |
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James McInerney Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 83 |
Thankyou for your comments it means alot |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Untouched by pain, Overwhelmed by love, Your chains of hate, Have come undone." beautiful James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loved the cadence...loved the words...good write...enjoyed |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
ooohhhhh I like! Nice flow and excellent choice of words "chains of hate have come undone". Really well done  Caroline |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was a glorious ride mentally, especially the part where she lets go of hate.... |
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