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stillness reigns
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stillness reigns |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
confounding illusions, confusing time… effervescent waves foam like cappuccino drifts on beds of translucent dreams stirring the waters of mundane memos etched on canvasses of streams, drawn from memories of brighter days filled with hope’s illusory schemes wafting in shallows, seeping from shrouds of sea tern hidings, echoing the wild call of driftwood memory, washed white by the strength of the tide’s sullen flow calm sounds of repose reverberate… stillness reigns when moon-strength ebbs and flights of fancy hibernate in subterranean caverns of sleep |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Much enjoyed this Steven, nicely done! You master your craft well!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."wafting in shallows, seeping from shrouds of sea tern hidings, echoing the wild call of driftwood memory, washed white by the strength of the tide’s sullen flow" Each time I picked a verse to comment on, I traded it up for another, ever more stunning one...might as well have copied the whole thing LOL This one was very sensual to read... Geez, I loved the whole thing! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very vivid and crisp! I love it! |
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