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trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

0 posted 2007-01-12 12:46 PM

Where diamonds, blue and glowing
Adorn the evening sky,
Where willows never have to weep
And children never die,
Where crimson sunsets bathe the sea
As herons take to flight,
Where angels dance on frosted clouds
And bask in God's delight,
It's there that I will harbor,
Where there is naught but truth,
It's there I'll find my haven,
There is my place with you.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-12 05:05 AM

wonderful words here my sweet Bill ... RDB

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2007-01-12 08:44 AM

You may not realize how pure the visions of your heart...but we do.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-01-12 08:46 AM

beautiful!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2007-01-12 11:17 AM

OH MY! A new favourite from you!
LOVE THIS!!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

5 posted 2007-01-12 11:31 AM

RDB Your Comments always make me smile in the morning.

Passing Shadow thank you for your sweet words.

Diamond thanks for your kind words.That was a very nice compliment

Enchantress..Im glad that you enjoyed the poem hopefully i can get a few more posted that you will like. Thanks for your sweet words this morning.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-01-12 11:45 AM

I love the sweetness of your poetry. Your words always touch me. You tru-ly are pure of heart.

Lovely writing, Bill!

To loving and being loved!

Linda

Beatrice Boyle
Member

since 2006-12-06

Posts 438

7 posted 2007-01-12 09:39 PM

As I've said before...you are a true romantic, dear heart.

Bea

Tom Zart
Senior Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 682

8 posted 2007-01-13 12:35 PM

You are one of the best poets on the web.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2007-01-13 10:30 AM

Excellent!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

10 posted 2007-01-13 08:09 PM

B-E-A-U-tiful darling...just beautiful...I can't put my finger on it but this reminds me of something else I have read....I'll get back to you if I think of it...Take care!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2007-01-13 09:13 PM

a beautiful piece of work
and you are one fine poet

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

12 posted 2007-01-13 10:04 PM

Tom Thanks for the comment. I have a long way to go before I can come close to some talents on these pages

Jl thank you

Angel Thank You..Could be 1 that i posted somewhere off the net?

The Lady thank you for you wonderful comment

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2007-01-13 10:26 PM

You have graced the seasons
and kissed God's hand...

well done!

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

14 posted 2007-01-13 11:45 PM

Thank you Sunshine..

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